OK I'm having loads of people PMming me to get the unedited version of this tale, the thing is I have lots and lots of drives and my files are scattered across them due to some bad file management on my part and failiure to label files correctly,  I am slowly gathering it together and have the first few sections which i gave to another member here who said he would edit it and post it up, the thing is I am getting lots of messages from people who don't want to wait, so I although I am grateful for the interest, and for the member who offered to edit it, to save time and people from having to wait I'm gonna jump on this thing and edit it myself as i have some free time and nothing better to do, I will remove underage references, but just to save too much editing accept that this teen here who goes from the age of... whatever is legal in your state to her early to mid twenties is petite and never really developed all that much physically, otherwise i'll be here forever, and before i get hate mail i do not condone underage stuff which is why i was hesitant about posting it, infact i prefer older women who are loose hence my being on this site.

Also there is no rape in this story, the character fantasizes about being raped and manipulates others into a scene where they take advantage of her but it is desired and not forced so i hope everyone can accept that because i have read way more brutal shit on here and there was no banning due to it. Anyway I'm doing this so that most of you can knock one out and enjoy, but I think in the other thread I have made it clear there may be some messed up stuff going on most of which i will edit out but still, if you think you might not enjoy, or be offended, don't read it. Part one up in a few mins. Peace.

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... I stayed in for the next few days and because my parents were always at work and my brother was still away I could freely watch his videos and play with myself. I locked myself in my room and watched the films. One that amazed me was about a woman who dressed up like a hooker and went into an alley, she took off her micro-dress and was naked underneath, she had "rape me" written across her ass cheeks in lipstick. She began to fist-fuck her pussy until it was really loose and wet and then just lay across some knocked over garbage cans, with her legs spread wide while the camera kept rolling. Soon some tramps came to fuck her but she didn't move or say a word at all; the four hour tape was recorded in long-play so it was eight hours long and the woman didn't move at all until sunrise when she just got up with cum dripping down her thighs, put on her micro-dress and walked away as if nothing had happened. Throughout the night over sixty tramps fucked her more than two or three times in all her holes, what I liked best was that they even helped loads of stray dogs to fuck her over and over again, she probably spent more time fucking the dogs than the tramps and she did not mind or speak out at all. I wanted to be used like that, so later that night I told my mom I would be spending the night at my friend Jenny's house; obviously didn't go to Jenny's at all, I left the house with my back-pack where I had some clean clothes and a 750ml Coke bottle, this would be all I needed. Before leaving I got my pipe cleaner and slid it up my pussy, ran downstairs and crossed the street heading towards Jenny's house; when mom closed the door I changed my direction. I slipped between the houses and climbed over a wall to get into the woods. As I climbed the wall I felt the steel-pipe cleaner poke and scrape around inside me, I was so wet it was lucky I didn't put on any panties. I only wore a really short, black lycra dress and matching tank top which I usually wore to my gymnastics classes, this meant that all my cunt cream was freely seeping down my thighs since I had no panties, I stayed on the wall for a short while, as I straddled it I began gyrating my hips grinding my pussyflesh into the rough stone surface until I had seeped so much of my fluids onto it that I could hear squelching noises coming from between my legs. After about 5 orgasms I made a move and as I raised myself off the wall I noticed that not only had I ejaculated but much of the fluids was my blood as I got a little too carried away; I examined my pussy and noticed that I had rubbed my lips raw, my clitoral hood was pulled far back and my swollen clitoris was an angry red colour and had many tiny scrapes across it, and it along with the surrounding flesh was gently bleeding. I couldn't wait to get to my hiding place.

I finally got there, it was a really large den hidden incredibly well in the middle of the woods. My brother made it two summers ago with a few of his friends and no-one else knew about it, they did a fantastic job most of it was actually underground. They dug out much of it, lay down some makeshift flooring and put up supports for the walls, which they all eventually replaced with enforced brickwork, and finally topped it off with a sheet metal roof which they covered with 2 feet of soil and thick thorny shrubs to make sure nobody would find it. The den could not be seen since it was underground, and was impossible to find if you did not know exactly where it was. The entrance was a short tunnel camouflaged with dense bushes about three quarters of a meter wide which you had to crawl through in order to gain entry; there was also a flap to allow you in but you first had to undo a latch to open it, this was to prevent animals from getting in. Once inside the den could be locked, there was a heavy wooden door just in case. My brother and his friends were very paranoid, probably because of what they used it for. The den, which was so large it was more like a huge bomb shelter or cellar (about eight meters long and four and a half meters wide) was very cosy, it was carpeted and had bean bags, cushions, and even two soft mattresses. They even managed to get electricity in it which they tapped from a nearby gas station, they buried the wiring so they wouldn't get caught and used it for lighting and powering a laptop PC which had mobile internet connection and a 21 inch tv + video combo. They made this den to use as their personal porn shelter so I could be sure no-one else knew about this, they all took oaths to never tell anyone, I found out when I was younger because I used to spy on him a lot. I never had a clue what they did there but over the past few days I began to suspect and now my suspicions were confirmed.

 I got into the den and locked the door just to be secure, the place was very clean and the lights still worked, my brother had probably been down here recently. The laptop was obviously gone, he never left it there but the tv was still present. In the corner of the den there was a stack of about three hundred porn mags featuring bondage, deep fisting, animal fucking, all sorts of extreme stuff, there was also a huge pile of porn vids. I hadn't come here to watch any of this, I only needed to hide out somewhere until about two or three in the morning, but what the hell. I watched some video about a slut getting heavily double fisted and immediately I became soaked, there is something about the idea of getting stretched beyond my limits that turns me on incredibly. I furiously masturbated myself with the steel-brush till I was loosened up and bleeding then pulled it out and replaced it with the Coke bottle. I was jamming this in and out for a good four or five hours non stop whilst watching a few fisting movies, there was even one scene in a film where a girl was taking a guy's foot in her past his ankle, this made me cum and cum until I almost crushed the bottle in me. I looked at the time and realised that it was almost time to begin my adventure. I watched one more film and then realized that I was tired and quite sweaty after all the exercise my bottle had given me so I decided to take a swim in the lake to wash off and pick myself up a little. I dropped myself on my ass stuffing the bottle right up my pussy, and got up to leave the den.

 I reached the lake, it looked lovely; it was about three minutes from the den and about five minutes from the bounds of the woods. The lake was crystal clear and the lamps surrounding it lit it up so well you could see the bottom; it was a warm night and nobody else was in the woods so I took off my trainers and slowly began to undress. I walked around to the other side of the lake feeling really liberated and aroused as I felt the wind against my naked body and the large bottle moving around in my pussy. I left my clothes on a bench by the side of the lake and slowly waked into it. I lay down in the shallow and began rubbing myself, I pulled the bottle slowly out of my hole and began licking my juices off it, they tasted good, nice and sweet. I reached down to my cunt which was gaping wide open, this was the first time the bottle had been out of it in over seven hours, my fingers slid easily into the wet hole, I curled up my thumb and slid my hand inside of myself. Once in, I fisted my pussy for a few minutes then spread out my fingers and massaged the fleshy walls lining the inside of my fuck-tube. I pulled out my fingers and was delighted to see them covered with thick pussy juice, I slowly licked my fingers clean and tasted some of the blood that remained from my earlier scrubbing session with the wire brush. I looked down at my pussy, it grotesquely hung wide open like the mouth of a cave, the lake water which gently washed up toward my thighs and would sometimes seep into my cunt added to this illusion. I tried to clamp my cunt muscles shut but this felt almost impossible, I had wrecked my pussy muscles, they were completely worn out. I slid further down into the lake and felt the water fill my cunt and I decided to plug that hole with the bottle so I easily slid it, bottom end first, into my slack gash and swam further out. When the water reached just past my little but pert breasts I felt the pressure forcing the bottle further up into my cunt, it felt incredible, I had to find a way of increasing the pressure and getting the bottle as far as it would go. I swam out to the centre of the lake and grabbed onto a buoy. The lake was about ten meters deep here and I felt underneath the buoy and found the chain, I knew what I was going to do could not fail. I took a deep breath and ducked under the buoy and proceeded to use the chain to pull myself as deep as I could, soon my ears were popping and I felt the pressure against my cervix painfully increase. A few feet deeper and the bottle couldn't take it anymore, it needed to get to the surface but didn't care that it was stuck inside me, so it punched past my cervix and shot right up until it battered mercilessly against the back of my poor little womb. I was totally winded, I dropped the chain and floated back to the surface. I lay on the surface of the water with my arms and legs stretched out, and slowly drifted to the edge of the lake crying out of intense pleasure and pain. When I reached land I looked down and could visibly notice a fairly large bump in the center of my abdomen, just under my ribs, the bottle was so far in me I couldn't believe it, I was still cumming. Cream was leaking down my legs like a waterfall, I rubbed my snatch which was still yawning wide open and began fisting myself again with the bottle still inside of me. After cumming another three times I thought it was about time for me to make my start; I fished deep in my puss to get the bottle out and that was when I got scared, I couldn't even begin to reach it! I panicked and wondered what I could do, How would I ever get this out of me? Who could I even ask and how could I ever explain myself? I cursed myself and thought of how stupid I was, I was a silly little slut sitting stark naked with a gallon of cunt cream pouring out of her worn out, gaping pussy, and a Coke bottle lodged so far up in her womb she can't get it out, what a fucking little whore, all the more shocking as I otherwise looked so much like an innocent, elfin waif, who should be naïve of such things… And that was when my panic turned into a sluttish pride.

 I pulled on my shoes, top, and little dress, this was hard with the bottle still in me but I managed, I then walked out to the main street which was practically empty and found an alleyway behind a derilict building. As I was walking through it I saw two sleeping winos, and fourty yards further ahead another two standing around a trash can fire; I saw them look over to me so I pretended to faint and fell over a heap of rubbish bags conveniently spreading my legs as wide as possible in their direction. The scene was set and now I only had to wait and see what they would do. The two approached….

... more to come if anybody wants, hard to tell because quite a few views but no comments :/

Man thanks so much for posting this. I would love to see more. I would really love the unedited version, but I can be patient if you want to edit the whole thing and post here first. Keep up the good work, I honestly made an account just to tell you how much I liked this story, and want you to keep posting

I love this!! can we have the rest of the story??

the original would be fantastic

Thanks for the comments guys, always appreciated. More will be coming perhaps later today actually. BomB191, to be honest the original isn't too different, I was hoping someone else could put more time into editing it more extensively, all I really had time to do was take out or change the age references, some anatomical details and make her seem a little simple in the head to cover the personality issues. Anyhow thanks again forr the comments guys and yes, once i'm done i'll be willing to send out the original if anyone still wants it.

no worries dude, here is another part too:

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 What I then felt was unbelievable and I couldn't hold it in any longer. When Jay punched through my cervix I cried out in ecstasy and they both nearly shat themselves with fright, I felt Jay's arm seize up in me and Bankey almost came on the spot at the sight of a tiny little waif writhing in extreme pleasure and squeezing and tugging her little nipples, with a whole fist along with nearly half a tramps arm buried in her crack. They didn't know what to say so I broke the silence by asking Jay if he wouldn't mind pulling the bottle out as I was kind of hoping to get fucked again. With that Jay had gotten hold of the neck of the bottle and slowly began taking it out, I can't begin to describe to you the look of their faces when they saw the bottle come out of my cunt. Bankey was the first to react by picking me up off the ground and holding me face to face with him, I wrapped my legs around his waist and he slid me down the length of his shaft. I started bouncing on his cock until he came and then I got fucked doggie style by Jay. After another couple of fucks they were both exhausted and lying on the floor, Jay held up his arm and said he was sorry and couldn't fuck anymore but if I was still desperate I could use his hand. I straddled his fist and sat down taking it three quarters of the way down to his elbow where it bottomed out in my womb after breaking through my cervix, I started grinding on his arm till I came then told them I had to leave. Jay reacted immediately by pulling his arm towards himself, and while I was still impaled on it, I wasn't going anywhere. I told them that I loved what they did to me but I still needed some more savage fucking; I reassured them that I would be stopping by often from now on so they let me go. I stuck the bottle back in my pussy after licking it clean, and made my way down the street to head back to the lake.

 As I was about to cross the road I saw some public toilets. I really needed to have a crap so I thought that this would be a good place to make a stop, especially since these toilets were well known for being the kind where sickos and perverts hung out at night. I hiked up my dress so that my slack swollen, red raw pussy was clearly visible, and walked in to the men's room expectantly. Sadly no-one was there; I walked over to the mirror and looked at myself, I was dirty so I took off my clothes and fetched some toilet paper which I wet under the taps and used to clean myself off. I looked at my body again, completely milky white except my nipples and cunt which were a deep purply- red from all the abuse they had endured; I loved the whore I had become. I turned to go into one of the stalls for a crap, when I opened the stall door I saw one of the nastiest cubicles ever. The loo was covered in so much shit that it was blocked, it looked as though at least three people had crapped in it; there was a huge heap of wet and dry turds floating in a bowl full of diarrhoea. I was immediately reminded of one of my brother's films about a woman playing with shit, and my disgust suddenly turned to interest. I sat on the bowl, my soft, lily-white ass and burning cunt came in contact with the foul mess in the toilet and I gently added my crap to the rest of the shit. The loo was overflowing with excrement now, I sank my ass deeper in it, forcing more crap out of the bowl; as I did so I felt my still gaping vagina fill up with a large quantity of diarrhoea. My soft cunt-lining was warmed by the liquid shit, it massaged my abused insides and I came repeatedly knowing that some strangers' vile waste was flowing into my secret hole.

  I got off the toilet, wiped my ass and pussy clean but then deeply packed my cunt full of the harder pieces of crap, there was not much room as the bottle was still inside me so I took the toilet brush and shoved the handle into my cunt until it made contact with the bottle. Once I could feel it bumping the coke bottle deep in my cunt I began pushing the brush deeper, this in turn forced the coke bottle to new depths until I could feel it once again penetrating my cervix, it was incredibly painful but arousing, I placed the end of the toilet brush against the door as I bent over grabbing the toilet seat and rocked myself back and forth nudging it deeper into my cunt. After a while I began cumming and pushed myself violently against the door driving the brush to the hilt until only the brush-head remained protruding between my legs, I could feel the bottle back inside my womb along with much of the shit I had packed into my vagina, and my cervix had closed around part of the brush-handle which had also penetrated my innermost chamber. As this created much more space in my cunt I slowly removed the toilet brush, the handle was covered with excrement and some of my blood; I then filled my vagina all up again with any solid mess I could fish out of the toilet, then once again wiped my ass and cunt clean with paper. Some crap slid out of me because my hole still hung so loose, but the majority remained inside. When I left the cubicle I was confronted by a middle-aged man waiting by the sinks.

...man... no karma at all, I guess this isn't to everyone's taste     ,  I may take a break for a bit, but here is a bit more for now just edited:



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"Did you have fun?"
"What do you mean...I...I.. am going now my dad is waiting.." -
"Don't bullshit me, and where do you think your going naked???"

 I was made, I forgot that I wasn't even wearing clothes, after a moment I realised that this was exactly what I wanted, and this guy, unlike Jay and Bankey, clearly wanted to fuck me from the word go.

"I...I.. think I'm going to fuck you"
"Whu-, what?"
"You heard me mister, that's why your here, and that's what I came here for. Now will you fuck my little pussy???"
"Umm... Yeah, 'course; how fuckin' old are you anyway?"
"Does it even matter, just do me."

 With that he picked me up and sat me on the ledge where the sinks were and spread my knees apart, just as he pulled his dick out and was about to impale me he noticed the shit in my cunt.

"What the fuck is that?"
"Somebody's shit"
"Ohh damn you are a dirty fuckin' whore! If you want me to fuck you, you better clean that out."
"OK"

 I stuck my hand in my cunt and pulled out most of the crap, Then I positioned my ass in the sink and arched my hips up so my pussy was right under the tap, I slid forward engulfing the entire 5 inches of the tap inside my pussy, then I looked at him and he turned on the tap. A jet of water thoroughly rinsed out my hole and I was ready to be raped. Before he managed to slice into me I asked him to remove one other thing from my hole, he reached into my cunt and pulled out the bottle.

"Man you're incredible! What kind of bitch are you?"
"I'm sorry are you upset?"
"Nah it's just I haven't met one as ...eager as you"
"My hole is quite big, I'm sorry if you don't feel much."
"If I don't I can just use your ass, I know how you like pain, what with the wire brush and all."
"How... how did you...?"
"Small town, I was there that day you hid it in you."


 With that he shoved hard into my ass and started reaming me at an unbelievable speed, when it became too dry to go on he would just pull out, dip his shitty cock into my pussy for extra lube, and then continue ass-fucking me. He fucked me so long that I lost all feeling in my anal ring, my ass muscle was as useless as my cunt. I told him how I liked being stretched so much and he offered to fist my ass, it was as good as when Jay hand-fucked my pussy; after ten minutes he pulled out and told me how it wouldn't close up. He offered to fist my cunt but I said that I already tried it and it didn't do much for me any more, so he said that he did have more than one hand; we looked at each other a moment and I smiled a big smile.

 I didn't know at first whether I could take being double fisted but I wanted to find out; the man, Cid was his name, started using his shit-stained hand to begin loosening me up, burying it all the way to my cervix and then instantly yanking it right out, then quickly punching it all in again. He repeated this continuously for over half an hour and now reached the stage where I had almost no feeling in my cunt and he could pull his fist out of me and plug it all the way back in without my cunt mouth closing up at all. In fact, my fuck tunnel was now so wide, it offered no resistance to the invading arm at all. Cid now started easing his other hand alongside the one already in me, he pressed his fingers in gently and eventually managed to fit his entire hand in my pussy. I looked down at my belly and was shocked at the huge moving bump between my hips, I could feel his hands meet inside my body and lock together.

"I am now going to lock my two fists together and pull them out at the same time."
"No don't they won't be able to come out. It will kill me!"
"It will not kill you, It might hurt a lot but think how stretched out and loose your cunt will look afterwards."
"I don’t know..."

 Cid began to pull, at first he couldn't budge his hands at all. Every time he tried to I could feel his fists bumping and forcing against my pelvic bones. It seemed that my frame was too small for both fists to exit together, this did not deter Cid though, he twisted his hands to the side a little and managed, painfully, to slide through, scraping past my hips. He was not quite out of me yet however, whilst he managed to pass from my hips my cuntal opening was another thing, when I saw the gigantic bump sliding down my belly and trying to come out of my pussy I knew this could not be possible. My opening was too tight and not wide enough for his hands to pass through, but I wanted them to do so anyway.

 "Tear me open, pull them out now!"

I'd give you karma if I knew how to. Good work so far, go ahead and take a break if you want