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« on: July 22, 2011, 05:27:10 pm » |
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I thought we might start a new collaborative story. This one is about an alien race with a special problem: they have enormous phallus's and they can only ejaculate when two are in contact inside a pussy. But they are now so big, so thick that they need outside help. So that's where Dana comes in. A human female with an insatiable appetite for pussy stretching (in spite of being a tiny waif she can be fisted relentlessly) who could be the answer to their problems. As Dana had always wanted to do extreme things like get her pussy double fucked by elephants (as she has become thoroughly bored of having human men do it) this sounds like just the job for her. She isn't even phased by their warnings that to accomplish this goal she will eventually become "more pussy than woman."
Now does someone want to write the first chapter or should I give it a go?
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« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2011, 02:33:34 pm » |
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Sounds pretty damn hot. Id say go for the first chapter and see what people canget off of that, I would love to read it.
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« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2011, 06:31:29 pm » |
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Definitely give it a go! ~f
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« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2011, 07:56:40 am » |
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The phone rang. Stupid phone. So she reached over to answer it. "Hello?" It was Carol. They chit chatted a little bit. Dana didn't know if Carol could hear the muted grunts and groans of two men. She could hear how bored Dana was. Of course what Carol didn't know was that Dana had her two hugest fuckbuddies doing their job: fucking her. Nate, below, and Ted above with Dana sandwiched in between them. Both of them in her pussy. Along with a vibrating egg and a regular vibrator that Dana was holding in there as well. Just the usual triple vag with two human dicks and toy that Dana got regularly. This wouldn't even be the first one she had done on this particular day. Though Nate and Ted did have bigger, thicker dicks than the two guys she had fucked earlier. After hanging up the phone she glanced over at the huge mirror next to her bed. She loved the look of how she contrasted with the two huge men fucking her. She was a regular waif: 4'11" and 82 pounds. Both men were 6'5 and well over 200 pounds. She liked the look. She liked the contrast in size. Both men grunted a bit louder and shot their load. They always seemed to go off at near the same time. So they were done. Dana was a bit sad that the whole thing was just so boring for her. After all both men came to her when they had trouble finding women to fuck because of their huge dicks. That Dana would take them both in her pussy at once had seemed unbelievable at the time to them. But she invited them to come by when two other hung men would be doing it. Seeing was believing and when the first two men were done they had both climbed into her well used pussy hole and gone nuts. That was six months ago. Ted stayed behind as Nate left. He was going to retrieve the vibrating egg buried deeply in her ruined cunt hole. At least Dana liked to think of it as "ruined" the men always seemed eager to fuck it even if they have to do it two or three at a time. Of course by "retrieving it" Ted would really be reaching his hand deep into her and grasping it. Then plunging his fist, egg in hand, in and out vigorously. Dana loved a good cunt punching type fisting. She couldn't even remember the fist time she had done it, it was a long time ago, but she had loved it and still did. Soon the air was filled with the soft sounds of the punch fisting. Spoosh then slurp. Over and over again. An hour later Ted was thoroughly exhausted and left. Dana went to shower. She had a huge knobbed dildo on the floor of the shower. At four inches in diameter it pushed her to the limits of what could fit between her pelvic bones. But, as she cleaned, she bounced her pussy on it. Enjoying it. Later, she prepared for bed. But not before she inserted her sleeping dildo. An overly large vibrating egg that she could plug into the wall socket and leave on all night. Soon she had drifted off to sleep where a recurring dream she had been having for years played out. She was at a circus and two bull elephants were there. Each with dicks as big as her upper leg. And a man was furiously building a contraption to allow her to take both in her pussy...........at once. But she awoke. Someone was in her apartment. How had they gotten in? No......two people. People?  ? They looked human. Taller than normal.......and what odd eyes. Almost too big. But her gaze did not stay on their face long. As she looked down she saw something that knocked her fully out of sleep. They had the thickest dicks she had ever seen. No way a human man could have something like that.......then there was a voice. But did their lips move? Where was it coming from? "If you like what will happen tonight you might well have all your dreams come true." Who had said that? Even as a bit of fear tinged her she was getting so wet. "And some dreams you haven't thought of yet."
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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2011, 09:44:30 am » |
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I like where this is going.
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I wish I had someone to stretch.
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« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2011, 05:04:57 pm » |
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Part 2: The Audition
What dreams might I have?
"We need to be sure you want this." The voice continued.
Dana couldn't deny that she was actually quite turned on. She was looking at the huge dicks and their huge hands.
"Oh, I want to do something," Dana replied to the two men. To drive it home she laid back and spread her legs. She was so good at spreading her legs she could bring them way back. A remnant of her days on the gymnastics team at her university. That was when she acquired her deep love of pussy stretching. So many times out on the mat and balance beams men had ogled her body not realizing her pussy, barely hidden by those outfits, had been ruthlessly stretched for many hours by fists and extra large dildos the night before (and sometimes the morning before too).
As her legs went back it made her pussy prominent. And what a pussy it was that the two strange men got a glance of. It was meaty, with huge folds of labia and obvious marks on the skin surrounding indicating how often it had been stretched open. Dana reached down and pulled the lips apart which they did with an obvious squishy noise. She then pulled out the sleeping dildo and sat it down. With it now gone her pussy was free to do what it did and that was to gape huge. She relaxed herself and as her lips stayed splayed apart her inner pussy walls began to actually fall out of the opening. Like a bundle of deeply folded pink flesh the inner pussy walls came out. As Dana relaxed further they actually fell out even more. By this point one of the two strangers had brought himself to her and touched them. Dana just looked down at him and pleaded, "oh stick your fist in. Stretch me! I must be stretched, it's all I really love."
The stranger did as requested. He bundled his hand up into a fist and plunged it inside her, taking those distended pussy walls with it, in one quick motion. Then he yanked it out and a loud "plop" filled the room. Dana loved it. Then it repeated. Again and again the fist plunged in and was withdrawn. Again and again that satisfying "plop" filled the air. Dana was lost. She loved it. She always loved it. She didn't really notice the other man was positioning himself next to her with his huge erect dick pointing straight up at first. But she saw him she knew what to do.
Dana got up and sat right down on his enormous dick. Far thicker, maybe almost 3 inches in diameter, than any dick she'd ever had. Once down she laid back and spread her legs again. She was waiting for the other man and he was far behind. Quickly he shoved his dick in too and Dana enjoyed the thrill of the stretch as he did so. Soon they were working together, sawing their enormous dicks in and out. Dana was lost in the bliss as they stretched her pussy around both enormous dicks at once. It was so wonderful she.....drifted away.
An hour later it was over. Dana had cum so many times on their dicks she lost count. But what was weirder was that when it was over she realized that somehow she was no longer in her apartment. She was in some sort of mock apartment that only looked like hers at first glance. She had considered that maybe their sex had somehow disoriented her and she was transported by a means she couldn't understand. Whatever it was she was relieved when a woman had appeared and directed her someplace else. And that's how she ended up in this office with another strange looking man who was now offering her a deal.
"Look Dana you are special. We really think that with some physical alterations your pussy might be able to take the M'elketh's dicks. If you can then you would be nothing short of a hero. But I must warn you."
"Enough of the warnings," she interrupted, "I want to do it if it means I can stretch my pussy to my heart's content."
"Yes," he dryly responded, "you will be able to do that. Once you are augmented through phase 3 there will be no hypothetical limit to what your pussy would be able to take. But are you okay with your body and mind becoming little more than a life support system to a pussy of such dimensions?"
"Will it still be pleasurable?" Dana asked.
"Oh yes, increased dopamine from ever increasing stretching is one of the two side effects."
"What is the other side effect?"
"Your skeleton and body musculature will shrink," he relied. "In proportion. You'll still have your body's shape but you'll be smaller."
"But my pussy will be bigger?"
"Yes, by many magnitudes."
Dana didn't really care if she ended up a few inches shorter she was already used to being short. She wanted that huge pussy. "Where do I sign?" Was her eager question.
"Not so fast," he cautioned, "we have a woman that needs to show you some things. She volunteered a year ago and is now in phase 3 of the process. While we've been enlarging her pussy we had to replace her on Earth with a clone because she's quite well known. Or is the clone here? I never remember."
Dana wondered who it was but her answer came when two doors slid open and laying in a large sea shell shaped bed was the beauty. Her hair flowing over her bronzed shoulders.
"My God," Dana uttered aloud, "Olivia Wilde!"
"Olivia, or her clone, I forget," the man noted, "has proven the success through this phase of the pussy changing process." Dana desperately wanted to see it but Olivia had a blanket over her crotch region.....probably to be a tease. "She will show you what she can do and then if you are not dissuaded you can officially volunteer and we will begin."
He left the two women alone. Dana stood there on edge. Then.....Olivia finally began to remove the blanket. Dana tensed up as she anticipated what she might be about to see.
Next Chapter Part 3: Olivia's Games
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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2011, 05:09:09 pm » |
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Anyone that wants to do the next chapter is free. You've already seen what is set up.
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« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2011, 06:06:47 pm » |
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Oh and I do have some plans of my own for down the line. You have no idea how huge her pussy will get and the fun things she ends up doing with Olivia (or is it the clone?).
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« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2011, 09:03:38 pm » |
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It was great until a celebrity showed up. I don't know why, but that's always an instant turn off for me. Sorry. 
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« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2011, 04:56:14 am » |
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Or is it the clone?
Too bad. I had to really stretch it (get it?) to work her in.
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« Reply #10 on: August 06, 2011, 01:44:14 pm » |
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What Dana saw took her breath away. She had always imagined a totally ruined pussy as looking somewhat like hers but only bigger. But what she saw was a pussy gone bezerk. It hung down between her legs with the top of the beginning of the clit hood not starting until where the bottom of a pussy would normally be. And the actual bottom of her pussy was hanging down over the chair's lip. And through it all hung the abused inner pussy walls as she could see the inner soft folds poking through a huge natural gape.
"My God," Dana said in amazement, "they did that to your pussy?"
"No," Olivia replied, "what they do is allow you to do this to your pussy if you want. If you have the desire to stretch your pussy out this much you can. And you can obviously see how much I love to stretch out my pussy."
"So how did you do it?" Dana asked.
"Let's see my toys." Olivia said while standing up. As she did Dana noticed how her pussy hung so low between her legs. The lowest lips were just a bit lower than her knees. And as Olivia walked the lips would swing side to side bumping into her legs.
Dana followed Olivia over to another room where, with the flick of a switch, a collection of pussy stretching dildos the likes of which Dana couldn't even imagine stood before her. All of them were many feet tall and the smallest one was still over a foot in diameter. The bigger ones looked to be almost three feet in diameter.
"You fuck these?" Dana asked.
"All the time." Olivia said with a wry smile. "I couldn't take most of these until I got the phase 2 procedure but I was still able get my pussy double fucked by elephants even after just phase 1."
"Wait, did you just say you got your pussy double fucked by elephants?" It was a subject of great interest to Dana considering her dreams.
"Oh yeah, I used to do that all the time. And the elephants here are bred to have much bigger dicks than back on Earth."
Dana was left a bit speechless and then Olivia asked something right out of the blue. "Want to play a pussy escape game?"
"What?" Dana was more than puzzled.
"You're small enough that I can actually get you completely inside my pussy." Olivia explained. "So, if you go in with a small oxygen tank and try to climb back out while I clamp shut to try and keep you in it can be very pleasurable for me."
"You've done this before?" Dana asked.
"Oh yeah. Some of the helpers here are petite like you." Olivia said with a glint in her eyes. "And it feels so good if they really put up a fight to get back out."
"Sure then," Dana was game. Besides, this sounded like something she might want to try one day.
With that two helpers came in and gave Dana the O2 tank. Olivia laid back down and spread her legs. The helpers then started forcing Dana up inside the huge vaginal canal. It took some time before Dana was completely inside and as she made herself comfortable she noticed that some extra ribs seemed to protect Olivia's internal organs from her weight. A product of the alterations she guessed. So then Dana tried to get oriented and was surprised at the diffused light coming through the sides of the pussy. She noted how stretched thin the walls must really be with her in there.
Once she figured out how to get herself turned around she began to do as instructed and she tried to force herself back out. She grabbed bits of the sides, hard with all the lubrication issuing forth, and braced her feet. Then she heard something.........it was Olivia moaning in pleasure. Dana realized her motions were causing immense pleasure for Olivia so she focused not so much on trying to escape as to repeat her foot and hand motions. As she did she hear the moaning give way to muted screams of ecstasy. Dana liked this and started to thrash around and found a series of motions that seemed to really get the pussy surrounding her off. As she did so she lost track of time.
A piercing bell cut through the play and Dana suddenly found herself being drug back outside. She was just a bit out when she asked what was going on.
"Your tank is low. We can't let you suffocate in there." One of the two helpers replied.
Dana looked back at Olivia, drenched with sweat with a look of astonished pleasure on her face.
"Can you get me some more tanks and let me back in?" Dana asked quite pleadingly.
"Oh God yes, let her do it!" Olivia yelled to them.
So they did. They gave Dana a new tank and some spares and she got back in. She repeated her motions from before and took some pleasure of her own from hearing Olivia enjoy it. Four hours later she finally emerged.
Dana looked down at the gargantuan hole she had just spent the day inside of. She thought of how it might be to have one of her own. As Dana looked on two more men came in, like the men that had fucked Dana the night she was brought here only with even bigger dicks, and watched as they started to double fuck another hole inside Olivia's pussy.
"Part of the alterations was for my peehole to be turned into a mini-pussy." Olivia explained. "Except, as you can see, I like to have it stretched too."
Dana had seen enough. She went down the hall to make it official that she was signing on for at least phase 1 of the eventual three phase process.
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« Reply #11 on: August 08, 2011, 01:40:55 pm » |
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Comments? Suggestions?
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« Reply #12 on: August 08, 2011, 05:29:47 pm » |
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You've gotta write what you like dude, ignore people telling you what turns them off, it's a story, if you can't look past one aspect that is largely superficial, ie the aesthetic of what is essentialy a fucking stunning celeb chick or a clone of her being thrown in and still enjoy what you freely admit was otherwise a story that turned you on... then sorry -Dragonfly I love your stories which is why I can't believe I'm saying this-, but you can't have much of an imagination as a reader (you have more than proven yourself as a writer don't get me wrong) and that's your loss. I like your style BasinC and i thought the way you introduced the other character was good, ie it's down to the reader to decide if its the real Olivia or not so nothing seems forced if people don't want to accept it for real. Sure there is obviously room for improvement but when isn't there, you jump alot of narrative but it's ok because you do it to get to the action, so fine.
My only suggestion, suggestion mind, is that you are good at the graphic explanations but you rush it to describe more of the actions and further the story which obviously is important... however, you are so good at the graphic description that it seems a shame that you seem more focused on moving the story along. So why not try enjoying it more and getting deeper into it? For example like when you were describing Olivia's modification and how big and wrecked everything was, and how she got it that way with the toys and elephants; you could have spent the whole segment on that alone, and another entire segment just describing the escape game. You have really good sub-story ideas within the larger picture, I would just suggest you don't burn through them all too quickly, because with your descriptive skills, the detail is far, far more enjoyable than the actual story itself. Just an opinion.
...and once more, Dragonfly, please don't get me wrong, I appreciate your views completely, I'm just trying to support a new contributor to the forum and I'm not saying you weren't either, it's just I feel if you feel passionately about something, your writing will be the better for it, and conversely if you chop and change it for others in a major way it will not have that edge... and the author clearly has a major thing for Olivia lol ;p
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« Reply #13 on: August 08, 2011, 07:39:25 pm » |
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...Because I don't like celebrities in stories, I don't have an imagination? Does the same apply if I don't like someone pissing on someone's face in a story? Or pedophilia? Or scat? Or bloodletting? Or any of the other things I don't like and/or won't write about?
Wow, dude.
I don't care what BasinC writes about, this is their thread. I was explaining why I didn't want to participate in this particular collaborative story. I personally find it helpful to know what readers do and don't like. Excuse the hell out of me for giving feedback.
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« Reply #14 on: August 09, 2011, 04:33:20 am » |
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I really didn't mean to get your back up that much sorry, and not to get your back up anymore, but yeah kinda it does mean that. If there is one trivial aspect like a celebrity or her clone in the story you can read past that, just imagine it as some random hottie called Olivia, big deal, is it really so major? If you can imagine it or look past the issue no it isn't is all i'm saying. And though I specifically mentioned a small superficial issue, even with the bigger issues you threw forward like paedophilia, imagine its just a petite woman, or with scat, skip that particular part or just more importantly accept it's all a story and nobody is actually ramming the taboo in your face, it is fiction, not real perversion and degradation with anyone being hurt, so why let any of it turn you off or offend you??? Why not just try and be a pervert and let the imagination run wild and enjoy something unreal by getting off on the depravity of it all, i mean you are on a porn site and that is what this kind of fantasy fiction is for. I enjoyed reading a story about a wife getting raped by a dog, in reality would i enjoy seeing that? Fuck no, there is a difference, it's all about imagination and perspective, and with fiction it's boundless and should be read as such. Just my opinion though, so if you disagree I'm sorry if it sounds like I am having a go, it's late and I may be a bit snappy because my Pyrat XO supply has gone dry and I have no other decent rum left in my house 
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