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« Reply #135 on: January 08, 2011, 04:51:29 pm » |
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well, that was different. I wish you had continued the theme left by the original author, but your contribution was cool by itself. could you go back and read the original posts and perhaps continue in that vein?
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The feline stalk, the stealthy swipe. The fatal pounce. The demise of the deadly Ninja diet-soda bottlecap
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« Reply #136 on: January 08, 2011, 09:15:25 pm » |
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It WAS interesting... but it was just to great before you changed it. The original was what pulled me in... changing it to a paranormal activity was just a little too far.
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« Reply #137 on: January 30, 2011, 03:46:34 am » |
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where'd damn go... damn.
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« Reply #138 on: January 30, 2011, 11:25:04 pm » |
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He was around 1/20/11 but hasn't posted in a while. It is a real shame as his story was getting better and better and was really in a class of it's own.
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« Reply #139 on: January 31, 2011, 12:54:07 am » |
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as with all great stretching stories once you get too far there is litte else to do, after playing with fallopian tubes and ovaries where else is there to go... I could've posted a continuation along the same vein as i have a 30+ page story i wrote on commision, sadly there are too many references to the age which is below legal and therefore not allowed on here, i just don't have the time to edit it all.
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« Reply #140 on: February 01, 2011, 10:10:21 pm » |
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Send it to me and I will edit it for you. If you do send it to calfee20@yahoo.com mention it in this thread because I check here more than that email address. Looking forward to reading it............calfee |
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« Reply #141 on: February 03, 2011, 12:24:10 am » |
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I may well do, i need to let the guy who i wrote it for know that i will be releasing it publicly as he has not paid me for the work so far and i've had enough. Just to let you know that it is pretty long and quite extreme and... sick in places, also, i dunno if editing will really help as there are lots of suggestions to age like school, parents, size etc and the main is personality, she will seem like a retard if she is suddenly 18.. but hey, some people don't get that fiction is fucking fiction. I sent another member part of the story already and they seemed to like it so... hey maybe it has a place here, just pleasse credit me for it. I'll send you part of it later and you can start a new thread here and i'll keep posting it to you as i retreive it (it's on my other hard drive so gimme a while).
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« Reply #142 on: February 03, 2011, 01:06:28 am » |
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ok calfee i've sent u the first part now, it's called a fuckwore's story enjoy it in all it's uncensored fuckupedness ;p
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« Reply #143 on: February 03, 2011, 07:03:36 pm » |
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WOW I can see why you haven't done an edit as it won't be a simple thing of changing a few numbers. I have sent you an email with some thoughts............calfee
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« Reply #144 on: February 03, 2011, 09:18:03 pm » |
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ooo, i'd like a copy. zhack_ahn at yahoo.com, if you don't mind. or there's http://groups.yahoo.com/group/direwolfcollection/ which is full of other stories about as realistic as holiday sluts. |
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« Reply #145 on: February 03, 2011, 09:49:31 pm » |
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Yeah but there is no under 18 stuff there
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« Reply #146 on: February 04, 2011, 12:31:58 am » |
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ok calfee, i got back to you in the email, good ideas buddy. Also to anyone else, I don't want to go around posting up a story which literally pisses all over every single law of decency out there only to get messages back saying how sick and fucked up i am... i know people here are very tolerant and understanding generally, but I have colleagues who literally get threats due to stuff they wrote on COMMISION, as in not their fantasies, but still it happens. As i said this was a commision, I am very fucked up in my sexual activities but I actually prefer older women (not grannies I'm not that stupid) also I am not into scat or pain, eventhough that features too... so anyway, all i'm saying is understand I am a writer and a sell out... therefore, i do not condone the stuff i write about, (except fisting because everyone should be doing that)... but the main thing is, it is all fiction, if you don't like it don't complain just stop reading it, because you are wasting your time, all i will do with your complaint is print it out and wipe my ass with it.
To those who are not easily offended, if anyone wants it raw or unedited fine, but be aware it is unfinished, I will let Calfee do an edited version here first, and if anyone is still desperate for it, I will on request send them the original.
...It is about 30 + pages in total, so give it time, and if there is any positive feedback I may work on it more to finish stuff up. Peace.
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« Reply #147 on: February 05, 2011, 12:02:26 am » |
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If possible i would also like to read the original story. my address is visible on my profile tab. thank you! ok calfee, i got back to you in the email, good ideas buddy. Also to anyone else, I don't want to go around posting up a story which literally pisses all over every single law of decency out there only to get messages back saying how sick and fucked up i am... i know people here are very tolerant and understanding generally, but I have colleagues who literally get threats due to stuff they wrote on COMMISION, as in not their fantasies, but still it happens. As i said this was a commision, I am very fucked up in my sexual activities but I actually prefer older women (not grannies I'm not that stupid) also I am not into scat or pain, eventhough that features too... so anyway, all i'm saying is understand I am a writer and a sell out... therefore, i do not condone the stuff i write about, (except fisting because everyone should be doing that)... but the main thing is, it is all fiction, if you don't like it don't complain just stop reading it, because you are wasting your time, all i will do with your complaint is print it out and wipe my ass with it.
To those who are not easily offended, if anyone wants it raw or unedited fine, but be aware it is unfinished, I will let Calfee do an edited version here first, and if anyone is still desperate for it, I will on request send them the original.
...It is about 30 + pages in total, so give it time, and if there is any positive feedback I may work on it more to finish stuff up. Peace.
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« Reply #148 on: February 05, 2011, 04:40:54 am » |
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i will post the original to those who want it after Calfee has put up the edited version, no worries.
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« Reply #149 on: February 10, 2011, 09:16:13 pm » |
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Could you send it to my email? puzzlexmaster2@aol.com |
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